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Post by Sasuke on Feb 19, 2005 23:50:24 GMT -5
2 years after Sasuke was taken over by Orichimaru. Naruto and Sakura trained and was fighting Sasuke. Sasuke smirked Sasuke:you still want him even though he betray you? Naruto:Yeah and I am going to keep my promiss to Saskura that I'm going to bring Sasuke back. Sakura then got behind Sasuke and Sasuke just use fire element grand fire ball at her.Naruto then charge in and use Umaki Naruto combo but Sasuke got behind Naruto and use Lion combo at him. Inside Sasuke:Naruto and Sakura I didn't want this to happend Orichimaru stop this. Orichman:Like I would with your body I'll destoy them.
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Post by Kakashi on Feb 19, 2005 23:52:06 GMT -5
Pretty good so far.
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Post by Sasuke on Feb 20, 2005 0:01:57 GMT -5
Thank you but you should wait toll when Sasuke meet Itachi then It'll get intense and good ending is.
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Post by Kakashi on Feb 20, 2005 0:03:05 GMT -5
Cool. I might start my own fan-fic. Hm...
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Post by Sasuke on Feb 20, 2005 0:05:29 GMT -5
How about you do about your favorte character
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Post by Kakashi on Feb 20, 2005 0:11:06 GMT -5
I will probably later. Right now It's 10:22 PM where I live, and I'm too tired.
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Post by Sasuke on Feb 20, 2005 0:15:53 GMT -5
Sasuke try to get controll of his body. Naruto then did naruto combo and then Sakura kick him up while draining a portion of his charckara. Orichimaru then use curse seal lvel 2 and then use Chidori dashing to Naruto.Naruto then use rasangang without charging but was lossing untill he tap into Kyubi but it wasn't enough so Naruto use his 2nd hidden power of the fourth andbroke Orichimaru's Chioubi and won the battle but Naruto and Sasauke was starting to die.
In Kanoha everyone in the village was there hopping Naruto and Sasuke wre still alive.THe fith hokage came out and she said there was nothing she can do.Hearing that Saukra and Kakashi rush in to see Naruto and Sasuke.Kakashi asked sakera to restore Sasuke and Naruto but Sakura was not sure of herself
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Post by Sasuke on Feb 20, 2005 11:40:57 GMT -5
Kakashi:this world there are many uncertain things but you wont master them if you don't try. Sakura then try to heal Naruto and that was easy but he need to rest for one week then comes Sasuke who was complucaited and she was failing to heal Sasuke untill she rembered what happend when she first saw Sasuke at school.
Flashback Sakura was walking to school in the rain it happend before he became an avenger.She lost her umbrella and no one was there she was so tired of training so she was starting to faint untill a boy share his umbrella and give her a charkara pill to heal her and then she thanked him. Sakura:what's your name. Boy:Sasuke,Uchiha Sasuke and what's your's Sakura:Sakura. They walk to school and at training bullies were picking on Sakura.Sasuke saw that so he beat them up and help Sakura got up. End flashback Sakura then was starting to cry since he help her in many ways but she couldn't help him untill Sasuke curse seal dissapered along with Orichimaru and Sasuke was starting to woke up.
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Post by Sasuke on Feb 21, 2005 13:22:39 GMT -5
Sakura jumped and hug Sasuke. Then sundenlly a ninja came in. Ninja:he's here Itachi is here.
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Post by Sasuke on Feb 22, 2005 20:31:17 GMT -5
As soon as Sasuke heard this he and Naruto ruout of the door and saw his brother.His brother saw him and Sasuke challenge Itachi at the Hokages' lake and Itachi accpetes.Sasuke,Naruto and Itachi dashes to Hokages' lake.As soon as they got there they faught each other.Sasuke atack Itachi with lion combo but Itachi use it on him.Sasuke smirked. Sasuke:now Naruto do it.Naruto use Rasangan at Itachi hitting him up then Sasuke and Naruto combine thier combo into naruto lion combo on Itachi but Itachi use kunias and hit Sasuke and Naruto.Itachi then use fire element grand fire ball and then did rasangan on Sasuke and Chioubi on Naruto.
How do you like it so far?
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Post by Serenity on Mar 3, 2005 19:51:55 GMT -5
It's ok but its kinda confusing for me
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Post by Kakashi on Mar 3, 2005 19:55:39 GMT -5
Yeah, that's what I think. Maybe try not to use so many choppy sentences, and put periods more often.
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Post by Sasuke on Mar 4, 2005 19:14:42 GMT -5
Sasuke and Naruto were both amaze of his power. Itachi did dragon blast. It hit Sasuke and Naruto leaving them with no charckara left.
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Post by Serenity on Mar 4, 2005 19:24:11 GMT -5
Thank you and Its a good fanfic so far I wonder what they will do without any Chakra
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Post by Sasuke on Mar 5, 2005 12:17:24 GMT -5
As Itachi was about to use combined justu Sharingan and Fire Element Grand Fireball Sakura jumped in the and was perished by the flame.The moment Sasuke and Naruto saw her perish. Naruto tap full power of Kyubi and Sasuke some how ativate Mangekyou sharigan.
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